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Tuesday 6 January 2009 (week 2) | email | e-Learning

English > Key Stage 3 > Unit 1 Dreadful Tales


Introduction

In this unit students explore a range of short stories looking at how they are shaped and developed by the writer. Initially they explore the openings of stories and analyse the various techniques that writer use to 'hook' the reader and encourage them to read on. They then look at how descriptive language is used to create effective settings, introduce and develop characters and add atmosphere and mood. Recognising the need for a clear structure within a story is also important; from sentences to paragraphs and the overall effect this creates.

 

Key Framework Objectives

  • R6 Adopt active reading approaches to engage with and make sense of texts.
  • R7 Identify the main points, processes or ideas in a text and how they are sequenced and developed by a writer.
  • R8 Infer and deduce meanings using evidence in the text, identifying where and how meanings are implied.
  • R12 Comment, using appropriate terminology on how writers convey setting, character and mood through word choice and sentence structure.
  • R14 Recognise how writers’ language choices can enhance meaning.
  • WR5 Structure a story with an arresting opening, a developing plot, a complication, a crisis and a satisfying resolution.
  • WR6 Portray a character, directly and indirectly through description, dialogue and action.
Key Skills: Reading Key Skills: Writing
  • Explore active reading strategies .
  • Identify main points or ideas in a text.
  • Infer and deduce meaning using evidence from the text.
  • Discuss writers' language choices.
  • Produce a text appropriate to purpose and reader.
  • Vary sentences for clarity and effect.
  • Use punctuation accurately within sentences.
  • Select appropriate and effective vocabulary.
  • Use paragraphs to organise writing and enhance meaning.

Assessment Task

This is a writing assessment in which students will be asked to create the opening of a mystery story aimed at pupils of their own age. As preparation, they read and analyse three narrative openings, identifying those features that help to create an atmosphere of mystery and suspense.

They will be given 40 minutes to complete their own story opening.

To gain a Level 5 response students should aim to:

  • opening is imaginative and grasps the reader's attention
  • use a variety of sentence lengths and structure for effect
  • almost all sentences use punctuation accurately, including speech punctuation
  • sentences should be organised into clear paragraphs
  • a wider range of connectives used (not relying on 'and' and 'then')
  • reasonably wide vocabulary with some words chosen for effect.